Mire House - Keswick
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POETRY PRIZE

Mirehouse Poetry Prize 2008

This prize is given in tribute to writers connected to Mirehouse, who include Tennyson, Wordsworth, Southey, Fitzgerald and Carlyle. This prize is also a celebration of the work of today's talented poets.

This is the fifth year of holding the Mirehouse Poetry Competition and we have had a record number of entries of a very high calibre. The topic for the competition this year was FLOWING. The entries were judged by nationally acclaimed poet Alice Oswald who was awarded the T.S. Eliot Prize in 2002 for her collection, Dart.

The winners were celebrated at a special event at The Garden Hall at Mirehouse on Sunday 2nd March, when Alice Oswald introduced the winning poems, discussed the process of judging the competition and the winning poems were read out.

The winner in 2008 is Denise McSheehy for her poem 'Swans Drinking at Midnight'. The prize winning poem and eight highly commended poems are set out below and are displayed on the Mirehouse Poetry Walk

The organisers of the Cumbrian Literature Festival, 'Words by the Water', have given valuable support and encouragement to make this competition possible.

The Finalists in the Mirehouse Poetry Prize 2008

Swans Drinking at Midnight

I walked by the canal late at night
- very still -
hearing the swans drink

the birds in their punk
eye make-up
steely, formidable

black lips dipping
into the black
rippling silk of the water

the sound of sipping and drinking
water slipping
down white throats

their white feathers framed
by the pocked concrete
their necks languid and lithe -

a swan sipping the water
dipping its head
into the spin of black liquid

water sipped -
the small sound of thirst slaked
a swan drinking at midnight.

Denise McSheehy


WINNER OF THE MIREHOUSE POETRY PRIZE 2008



In the city, she thinks of Beauty Creek

She’s never seen the place in winter: it’s like trying to imagine
a child being old, it can scarcely be done. Mud frozen,
falls stopped: sheen of ice over rocks. Rush and tumble of streams
halted and silent. Lakes enamelled with ice. Land under snow,
bound with it, bandaged. Bulbs and roots fixed in stiff earth.
The whole landscape suspended, in stasis: like someone near death
who has no energy for anything but breathing. Even the bears
are asleep in their caves. Even the river, the great pale green
Sunwapta is ice, is still. This is the hardest thing to imagine,
like thinking of the dead. And the house by the river,
its spring water frozen, windows curtained with snow
making a strange underwaterish light in the rooms
where everything will be as she left it: the woodpile, the table,
pots by the stove, the gleaming jars of bottled fruit,
dark gold of maple syrup she drew out of the trees.
A house with no one in it, like a body emptied of its soul.
Everything closed down, closed in on itself. As if,
when she left, she were Persephone, and in her absence,
winter came. As if she’d turned the huge Sunwapta into ice.
Something must make it happen, something mythical
that would make you believe in what’s unseen –
a house under snow with its bottles and jars,
the pent force of a stopped river, and underneath the ice
six feet of air, and down below that, water still flowing,
the silty, unstoppable water with its living fish.

Elizabeth Burns


Isabel’s Island

She’s afraid of too much breath,
she’s afraid of smudging,
she’s drawing an island
where nobody breathes.

Around the island
is a blue-crayoned mantle
which doesn’t ebb or flow.
There are no birds, no dogs, no concertinas.
People sit, stiff as pokers, in their doorways.

Between the houses are cherry trees
no one can pick because no one
can bend their arms.
How do they dress?
How do they go to the toilet? wonders Isobel

who is still holding her breath.
She has just enough left to take a knife,
sharpen her pencil,
put waves on the mantle,
woodpeckers in the trees,
a giant stripey caterpillar eating the cherries.

Everything in her picture is breathing now.
Breath is flowing down her pencil.
Soon there will be rain, even a storm.
She knows how to draw a yellow gash in the sky,
hard black hailstones hitting the head
of a woman playing the concertina,
a dog running home wet through.

Jennifer Copley


The Invention of Otter

No one can say how
it came out of the water
or how it plucked pebbles
from the river’s pockets
and made thoughts

no one can say
how the night made nostrils
and whiskered its way
into the roots of an oak

no one can say
how its rudder thickened
with the wind, made fur
ripple into a stream
or how the storm muscled
a heart out of the moor

who can say when the eel
learnt fear, or the trout
first felt speed shiver
through its sides?

Only, when it swims
all the water leans toward it
frays air into a swilling of pearls
and streams love themselves
more deeply

all I can say is
at that moment, play
nosed its way into the world
took its place among the four elements
made them five
and now
when it silks the water
the weave of it says hush
keep it secret.

Miriam Darlington


Borrowscale Cycle

Wetherlam wharrels down loadpot low
Nethermost leeming in mirehouse row
Rainsborrow lonscale waterside fall
Corridor shelter in beckside hall

Bannerdale greenburn capplefall knowe
Breasthigh crookabeck lazonby flow
Townhead hinning at waterhead spout
Overgates landsfoot outerside out

Oldchurch sallows in sunderland field
Underscar cottages pooley bield
Shivery brandelhow sprinkling sand
Bretherdale chapelhouse bedlands stand

Burnbanks cloven at thunacar force
Ellonby earthwork in fleetwith haws
Rowantree withered at dead dubbs fawe
Waterfall thunders overend ore

Goggleby guardhouse kitchenhill spy
Underwood bunkers on buttress high
Snittlegarth village in snarker slack
High street drunken on whitewater black

Settlement fewling at highground moor
Emerald southerndale causeway door
Honeypot monument herdwick height
Moorhouses stand over widewath white

Braesteads brimmer under broadness moat
Southernby riddings sail woodhouse boat
Manesty sergeant riggindale ark
Motherby strickland walloway park

Shipman sharrows at lowbridge middle
National marshalls swirl o swirral
Bessyboot naddles floshgate gimmer
Deepdale end of cumbrian summer

Author’s note:
All words used in this poem are drawn from place names and features shown on Ordnance Survey 1:50000 scale map 90, Penrith and Keswick, hence the restricted vocabulary.

Alan Dawson


By No Means

By no means like the trailing of her dress
you followed to your own decline for years,
nor like the hair that trailed on her dress
you followed to the brink of bone-cold tears,
and all you wanted was her happiness,
and all you wanted after all was yours.

By no means like the language that she spoke.
You listened and you listened and you heard
in English and in Spanish, all that talk
that no one ever said they understood,
you understood as if it were your talk,
as if it were yourself you understood.

By no means like the days nor like the years
you waited at the corner of her world
as hungry as a snake; you waited all those years
behind the dress that trailed, the hair that trailed,
you trailed as if something that was yours
would soon be yours, unless of course you failed.

By no means like the river or the wave
despite the trailing dress, the trailing hair,
nor even like the dust-drenched light you saved
in memories in memory of her.
If anything she moved like a chopping knife
in sine like oscillations through the air.

Robert Griffiths


Snow In Alston

Snow falls along the Hartside road
and on the sheep huddled by stone walls
and on the moor’s outstanding beauty
and the derelict house 1900ft above sea level.
It’s blowing in from the North-West – unusual
for snow– over Eden fells, mountains,
a blizzard against farmers gates
and over lakes, Thirlmere and Derwent Water.
Even so Mrs Munro lights up her Old Virginia
and watches for the umpteenth time Pride and Prejudice
I thought I should have broke my heart …
while in the upstairs of Bastle houses
with single glaze windows filling up, breaths rise
and the snow follows and follows and covers
the stone roofs and scaffoldings
and the red tractor rusting in the yard
and Russ forgiving his father and fathers sin
not to mention How to heal your life
and the Methodist minister dying
and it was nice snow should come this morning
now with whiteness all around
spread wide over an unseen sky.
Yet still it sheds down and will all night we are told
fall on the Stainmore road
and everyone stranded there in the back seats
along the dual carriageway of the A66
and on Appleby and the alms houses
O Jane, Jane what is to become of us…
and lord only knows
and isn’t life to be endured
and they’re predicting snow tonight and tomorrow
at least 20 cms over the Pennines and the North
and all along the main arteries
and on Julia’s new people carrier
and St Augustus and the exorcist priests.
It’s snowing on the Tyne and the coffin tracks,
the bus shelters and Stobart trucks
and on all the children leaving school at 2 O’clock.
It’s snowing on all of us.

Deborah Hobbs



Ark

Noah sent a raven
a dove
to find land, a mountain
a crag
but here on the beck
he’d have sent a dipper
bessy ducker –
I’ve heard them sing
through winter
and its amazing
very warbler-like
at below zero
above the roar
of the river
in full flow –
somewhere above the spray
the foam
it is summer in song
the water
the alders drip in time
until
on whirring wings
it flies, heads off
upstream to sing
of hope
from that only rock
above the water
as the flood
recedes

(bessy ducker - local name, Cumbria, for the Dipper)

Phil M Houghton



Sleep-Talking

She was talking in her sleep, not
clearly, hardly English, as if sleeping
she tip-toed through a charred dictionary
as large as a house. I heard
a mutter from a womb: it was echoic, cobby,

down at the roots, sounding
like a bairn lost in a ribbed basement.
I listened to brief growls
the little vowels of a grief slow and vague.
She said mm mommelle mammellen

mm memmumellia
The powdery consonants
a tutankhamun of strangeness in the bedroom.
I nudged silence, and she was silent;
mum, a mask in the dark, lips sealed.

But she must have moved then
wherever she was and was passing barefoot
through ghost pages drifting deeper
down an unlit stairwell, stubbing the dust
and mumbling again. She said

am mm muroemm eommarawi
imm m em atumm
It was a foetal slur, papyral and vacant,
the dark flakes of syllables
crumbling on her tongue. I shivered

and nudged again. Silence…
This time a long, long, silence…
and one final breath
that was nostrilled, drawn out and stopped,
as if far off a door creaked and closed:

she said nn n nirrr…
then settled at last in the sheets.
The furniture stood in its shadows,
Her gold in its little box.
She lay, as ever, arms at her side,

in the darkness, amber lids shelled.
In the windings of breath
we began our silt migration into sleep,
carrying nothing, the words like dunes
flowing to new arrangements.

Terry Jones

 
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